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Поделиться22020-10-03 20:33:48
You should have won
This story was MUCH better than the first place winner. In fact, it was probably the best story I've read at this site.
Just excellent.
Поделиться32020-10-03 20:33:54
Terrific story
If you don't have your work published as yet, please do try and get it out. Your work is a lot better than most of the fluff out in print in the name of romance novels.
Поделиться42020-10-03 20:34:00
What a sweet story!
Very sweet and well-written. This would actually make a good mini-series or chick flick.
Поделиться52020-10-03 20:34:06
Top notch professional talent
Awesome story! You put me in the story. I felt like a fly on the wall watching the whole situation develope. You should think about teaching or really publishing your work. Just release a Harlon Ellison type thing of numerous short stories and compilations. Keep it up!
Warm Regards
Michael
Поделиться62020-10-03 20:34:11
Absolutely Beautiful Story
Very sweet love story. Touching. I found myself rooting for them as their relationship progressed. Thanks.
Поделиться72020-10-03 20:34:17
Nice things happen to nice people
This is the kind of love story that everyone likes to read. You always like to see good things happen to people who do and say the right things. This story line settled close to my heart and just made for the kind of reading that I find so warming and touching. Guess I'm just a touchy - feely kind of guy.....Great story.
Поделиться82020-10-03 20:34:23
Very good.
An outstanding story that mixes professional collaboration with physical satisfaction. Like foreplay, it lingers on primary details, taking its time leading up to the anticipated climax.
Поделиться92020-10-03 20:34:29
Glad I stumbled
I'm glad I stumbled on Salamis' comment. If he says it's good, I know it will be and I was delighted to read it. The reaction of the readership again confirms for me how many people here appreciate a story rather than a list of anatomical connections. Conflict is always helpful but clearly well-drawn appealing characters can carry a story.
Поделиться102020-10-03 20:34:35
A deligthful romance
I am always left feeling good after reading one of your stories, and this one was no exception. These are two of your most endearing characters. Normally, I expect a story to have some conflict to overcome, some challenge to act as the obstacle. Your stories lack those elements and still manage to keep my interest and enjoyment. Thank you.
Поделиться112020-10-03 20:34:40
Great story
When you feel wonderful after you read a story, you know the writer did a first rate job. This story has everything, romance, loving prople, great plot and happy ending.No wimps, no brutality,no rape etc. What a breath of fresh air. Thanks for writing this refreshing loveable story. 60 year old George
Поделиться122020-10-03 20:34:46
Nice
A great story from a very good writter. I can't wait to read more of your stuff in the future. I enjoyed this
Поделиться132020-10-03 20:34:52
It must make your
heart feel good that all the comments have been raves about you and the story and not about some nit picking item within the story. It is a wonderful story by a really good writer.
Поделиться142020-10-03 20:35:00
Wonderful read
Wonderful read, with just the right mix of romance and real life to make it more than just a story, but a drama that draws you into the characters and their lives. I hope you write more about them, and, for only the second time on literotica, find myself sincerely urging a writer to consider doing a full length book version of the story.
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