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Exciting!
This is an excellent seduction of a wife losing her inhibitions & developing her sexuality into an exciting surrender.

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a dirty old man's dream
i just need some new neighbors.. ;)

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re: anonymous I loved it
"I love my wife". No you don't. Anybody that turns a wife into a whore doesn't love her. You're a sick fucker, like so many on this site.

Отредактировано Mirinda (2020-10-03 20:26:56)

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I loved it.
My wife was kind of shy herself, that is, until we put in a pool. By the third year she had gone from full body one piece suits, to full coverage bikinis then on to string bikinis to finally a whole collection of Wicked Weazel suits. They are very tiny and most are see thru. It wasn't an older neighbor she fucked, but their teenaged son. She lusted after him each time he mowed the yard without a shirt and loose basketball shorts, showing his cock swinging back and forth. I encouraged her to flirt with him and pushed her to do more. It didn't surprise me when I came home early and watched them fucking on one of the chaise loungers. It became a game where she would time it so that I could watch almost every time. The best was the time he had two of his friends with him. I watch three teen boys make my wife watertight. It was hot. I love my wife .

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in honor of that whore bonny/vasty

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It's like everything else in life
This story is like everything else you'll see in life. Some people will like it, some will hate it. Yes it is cliche about the size of the man's dick but usually it's a much younger man. If this story continued I don't see her leaving her husband for the neighbor. I could be wrong and it's up to the author to prove me wrong. As for the grammer mistakes I've seen some so bad as to make the story painful to read.

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Liked It
I liked the story, but the end felt too rushed. You had a good buildup but then you end things too abruptly. You've done this in some of your other stories too. It either needs a sequel or you should get to the actual sex sooner. But hot story either way.

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Excellent
Needs a sequel

Отредактировано Mirinda (2020-10-03 20:27:39)

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Pretty nice
I liked the build up, but I think the conclusion(the actual fucking of Bob and Anna) felt a bit rushed from the reader's perspective, as we didn't really get to see much of it.
I'm hoping for a continuation where we get to observe more of those two "being naughty" with each other. I'd like it even more if we could see a recording of their first fucking while the husband was sleeping.
I don't know in what direction you'd want to take the story, or if this is meant to be sharing or cheating or cuckolding or what, but I can very much see an opportunity in taking things further, maybe the two of them starting to leave the husband out of their fun and focusing on each other more exclusively(could be done with a perspective switch or the husband stumbling on some recordings after having noticed them being less open about their activities or thinking they've been together less often).
I personally wouldn't mind an element of Anna being "trained" either, but that's by no means a necessity, even without that hint of sub/dom relationship it could work very well for me.
Hope to see more from you.

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Data, dammit
OK, the 11-inch "honker" (?!) did throw me off, but the rest of the story was well done. Data, readily available, says that less than 1% are over 8, so who knows what miniscule percentage is 11, or what medical issues would accompany such an anomaly. Much more believable with believable numbers - note she didn't have 76" KKKKK bra size, and if she had, it not only would have been unbelievable, it would have been a turn-off. Elevens are similar. Gave it a 5 to balance out the haters, but it was really a 4 imo.

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Sequel please!
Please give us a sequel, your story had me hard as a rock!

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Incredibly hot
Another of the most erotic stories on this site.

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It's a hot story but I think if I were Tim I would feel incredibly heartbroken and insecure. I would feel I would no longer be able to satisfy my wife like Bob . See what people don't relize is they think it's just sex but sex converges the heart too. You can't share something like this with someone and have hearts not affected . It would be safe to assume their marriage would soon be falling apart because tTim would no longer be the Anna's desire.

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Sequel please!
Just dont have the husband be ok with it openly and never have her admit it. Have her sneaking around etc, lying and cheating. Fuck the haters here dont listen to them its a great story.

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VERY Hot Story
This begs for a sequel and you write it all so well. What I like about this story is that everyone is happy for a different reason. Nobody is agonizing over what happened and getting a gun or a divorce. Love how Anna's exposure of herself, and discovery of Bob's much bigger cock, led to so much pleasure for Tim. Hopefully, the continuation would have Anna and Bob enjoying one another as often as possible, but strengthening Tim and Anna's love for each other.

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Great story
Loved it...and why are grammar/literature snobs critical on a site they visit to wack off. This isn't some literary journal, it's a fucking porn site. Get some self awareness you arrogant fucktards. It made me hard. 5 stars.

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Wow,  hot.

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