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Поделиться22020-10-03 20:14:39
Super Sexy
Best story I've read forever. Kept me focused all 32 pages. Loved the ending but wish it didn't. Going to look to see what else you've written.
Поделиться32020-10-03 20:14:44
Amazing story!
Great read, I hope you continue with the story
Поделиться42020-10-03 20:14:50
Add my "Wow!!" to the list. I just spent the whole morning of my day off reading this story. I couldn't put it down. I kept picturing Ed as the actor Patrick Warburton (google him and you'll see what I mean). Though most of the sex in the story wasn't incestuous, I'm glad it was in this category as it gave me a chance to read it. Definite five+ star story for those who can read something longer than a two page spanker read.
Поделиться52020-10-03 20:14:55
Wow!
I loved your story and would read more. The judge episode was jarring. I don't care, because your characters are so alive. Thank you!
Поделиться62020-10-03 20:15:01
Beyond well done
The only thing that could bug me is the Victoria ladies ending not being there as it would/could define now the violence carries on the end of the Eds character. That being said it was so good talent the full day reading it!!Well written and carried threw plotted story, well done writer and proof readers!
~KIA
Поделиться72020-10-03 20:15:07
Absolutely amazing.
I normally don't read long stories here as i get bored quickly with the characters but this story kept me reading page after page. I hope for more to continue this story, maybe short stories with Ed's relationship with each women. If i voukd give you 6 stars i would.
Поделиться82020-10-03 20:15:13
Excellent!
I couldn't stop reading it once I started and finished it in a day. The story is very well written I loved every moment of it. I hope to read more works like this one in the future, if you aren't a professional writer I believe that you can be. Keep up the good work!
Поделиться92020-10-03 20:15:19
An amazing read
I usually don't go for long stories, as I prefer quick spank-the-monkey material, but your story is so bloody good, that I've been stuck reading it. I still just halfway, but I'm gonna finish it 
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Поделиться102020-10-03 20:15:24
Fantastic story!
This was by far the longest story I have ever read on this site, and it just pulled me through every page. Bravo!
Поделиться112020-10-03 20:15:32
So many stories in one
Very well written. It could have very easily have been a different story or segment for each of the ladies. All would be winners on their own. Collectively it is brilliant.
Thanks, will we get to find out what happens next?
Поделиться122020-10-03 20:15:39
5 Stars is not enough for this MASTERPIECE.
This is the best erotic story I have ever read. The twists and turns made me want to keep reading. I will certainly look for this author in the future and I really hope a sequal is in the pipe line.
Поделиться132020-10-03 20:15:46
brilliant story
Sex without a story is just another description of erotic activity. This is so much more - an interesting story with twists and turns, added to which it was well written.
I really enjoyed it - compelling reading.
Поделиться142020-10-03 20:15:51
Wonderful
This story was well written and captivating. I put the rest of my series reading on hold just to be able to complete this story. If a sequel is planned I would love to have the chance to read it.
Поделиться152020-10-03 20:15:58
Bravo!
One of the most in depth and best written works I have ever read... Words cannot begin to describe...
Поделиться162020-10-03 20:16:05
Top three of all time.
Your story was outstanding. It was well written and should be read by everyone who visits this site. I will be looking for more from this author.
Поделиться172020-10-03 20:16:10
Awesome!!
Couldn't stop reading!
Real!
Amazing!
5stars!
Поделиться182020-10-05 21:25:20
Wow, wow,wow 
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